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- The amount of commentary from me about my topic and sources was changed. I did not have enough comments within my first draft, therefore, I added a little bit more in the second.
How did you reconsider your thesis or organization?
- I didn't reconsider my thesis or organization that much, as I felt that I did all that thought for my first draft. I still feel like my listicle is organized well because it looks like how Buzzfeed would organize an article.
What led you to these changes?
- The instructor meetings helped me to realize what I needed to change and add within my draft. Also, thinking back upon the purpose of my listicle helped me to really focus on what needed to be changed.
How do these changes affect your credibility as an author?
- Depending on the way an author adds his or her commentary, it could affect their credibility either way. However, I made sure to keep my credibility by not adding any radical opinions or attacks to the other opinion.
How will these changes better address the audience or venue?
- I think that these changes add appeals toward my credibility, and therefore, my audience is likely to analyze what I am saying further and in turn my purpose for this article is fulfilled.
How did you reconsider sentence structure and style?
- While I did not change the sentence structure, I did reword a few things within my draft. First, I edited my conclusion to end on a more positive note-as Buzzfeed would. Then, I added some commentary about my sources after they were mentioned.
How will these changes assist your audience in understanding your purpose?
- I think that these changes will really help my audience to understand that I want them to see the positive side of AI technology. Also, I think that adding my own comments can make the article more personal, therefore adding the appeal to emotion.
Did you have to reconsider the conventions of the particular genre in which you are writing?
- I did change the way that I cited each image. However, I did not change much else in regards to the listicle conventions.
Finally, how does the process of reflection help you reconsider your identity as a writer?
- I feel like reflection helps me to understand what I can change about my writing and my process for the next assignment. For example, based on my last project's reflection I realized that I really needed to put more effort into my first draft. Therefore, for this project, I did the bulk of my assignment in my draft, so that now for my final draft I only have to edit the details and give it the polished look that it needs.
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