First off I would like to thank for for helping me with my drafting process.
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| Kevan. "Work in Progress" 10/8/2011 via Flickr. Attribution 2.0 Generic |
As you read through my paper, I would like you to understand that this is a first draft, and that I may have missed some points within the rubric (or at least didn't make them clear enough). I will try my best to make them clear the next time around! Also, I understand that my paper may seem a little blank as it only has one image, which I do plan to fix later. I would like feedback on exactly what points I missed and what was unclear, and also any general feedback things (criticism on sentence flow, grammar etc.). Thanks!
You can view my draft here.
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