Identifying Basic Grammar Patterns

In this post, I broke down the longest paragraph of my QRG draft into it's various components. The paragraph I am referencing can be found here.

  

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What I noticed within my paragraph is that I don't switch up the style of my sentences very often. For example, I had to modify what I wrote to incorporate three sentence patterns, and it was also difficult to figure out the sentence structure for each sentence. From now on I will be sure to be aware of the sentences that I write and try to vary them more often.