Paragraph Analysis

For this post, I will describe the components that were well executed in my paragraphs for my QRG. I will be referencing my Copy for Paragraph Analysis document on Google Docs.

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After reading through my draft and Rules for Writers, I now know what I need to work on within my paragraphs. Overall, I feel that they were a little difficult to analyze because I feel that I could only focus on the content itself, but, I did notice that I did well at developing my main points. However, I need better transitions between my paragraphs, along with linking them together with said transitions. The organization was okay, but I will continue to revise until all of them are organized well.