Draft of Rhetorical Analysis

This post will present my first draft of my rhetorical analysis.

Dombrowski, Quinn. "Russian essay draft" 03/24/08 via Flickr. Attribution-ShareAlike 2.0 Generic

To my peer reviewers:

Once again, thank you for taking the time to look over my paper! As you read through this, I would like you to look at the organization of my thoughts and if there is enough analysis within my essay. For some reason, my mind was spacing on how to best present my thoughts, and if there were even enough thoughts presented. So, bear with me! I know this is will probably be hard to read right now, but I will try my best to make it better! Any feedback other than what was already mentioned would be greatly appreciated as well. 

You can find the draft of my essay here!